Background
In the first attachment Under the name of Research proposal with comments came from the Research Degrees Committee you will find my initial research proposal, and below feedback from the research committee came on it:
*The length of the research proposal exceeded the expected word count of 3000.
*The methodology should be strengthened and a wider range of methodological literature should be referenced.
*The methodology should be more clearly defined and justified in relation to the research questions, aims and objectives.
*The research questions, aims and objectives should be made clearer and more focused.
*The number of objectives should be reduced.
*The research philosophy needs to be re-examined and clarified.
Please read my initial research proposal to give you an overview of my research
In the second attachment, you will find my revised proposal Under the name of Revised.
Requirement:
After you read the two versions Come up with state-of-the-art research proposal doctoral degree level, especially in the methodology, research philosophy, research questions, aims and objectives and all aspects.
Also , read attachments Under the name of SOLS Book English version and ithraa_briefings_logistics_eng_AW will give more insight as it is the base of research
Also, any good ideas are welcome