The submission presented general information about social determinants. The information was nicely organized using appropriate headers, acknowledging behaviors such as tobacco and alcohol use and their deleterious effect on society.
The discussion of the deficient SDOH, its supporting data, and the target population affected by the deficient SDOH was insufficient. Similarly, the policymakers’ identification and the discussion of why the issue needs their attention was incomplete. The current policy, its ethical implications, and the demographics table were also insufficient..
Likewise, the presentation of the policy alternatives was incomplete. The argument for the preferred policy, its desired results, financial implications, barriers, communication methods, ethical implications, and the results of inaction were incomplete and lacked relevancy..
The Executive Summary lacked detail about the proposed policy, its scope and context, and a course of action. Lastly, the change agent description and the knowledge and skills discussion were incomplete.