M1: Analyse the impact of a particular marketing campaign run by a specific business – you mention Tesco’s campaign, but the rest of the text is general (e.g. Marketers can know the source of increased sales by evaluating the source of the customers of the business whether they were from social media advertising or traditional media forms of marketing like television and posters.; Market reach analytics is also a significant approach through which a business organization can measure the efficiency of its marketing campaign. Market reach analytics is mostly used by a business organization that incorporates digital marketing through content creation in their business organization…) – the point of this section is to analyse Tesco’s campaign and based on this provide an example for Office Lunches
P3: Explain how businesses measure the impact of their marketing using at least two contrasting businesses – no contrasting businesses present, very general info here and in most of the text
P4: Describe the constraints on marketing for a specific business – same here, not specific to the chosen company
Moreover, given that you have altered the headings, it is very hard to navigate which section corresponds to which task
–citation:
not only the text is still undercited, most of the in text references and ref list are not formatted correclty (e.g. (Miller, Amy, and Jennifer – these are names, there is no page number, in ref list this is indicated as ‘Miller, Amy, and Jennifer Cioffi… – so their last name, each of them, is Cioffi? or is it Amy Miller and Jennifer Cioffi?)
–the issues mentioned before are still present, some sections (e.g. analysis of impact) need additional work