What comments or queries would you have about the show or the works in it? What suggestions would you make about the prose style and about the author’s lexical choices; how would you improve the syntax and sentence structure?
Commentaries on two Art Exhibition Reivews Two 100-word commentaries on two different Response Papers. You should pick two responses to discuss at 100-word length. After seeing the exhibition, what do you think the review could have emphasized more or less? As an “editor,” what comments or queries would you have about the show or the […]