In Q 5 : You need to describe a picture as you can see in the assignment brief . when you are starting to describe the picture you must follow these things : drop , shift , zoom in and zoom out .
I’m going to explain to you exactly what are they mean :
When you use a Drop you need to follow these bullet points
. what can you hear?
. Add a simile.
. what can you see?
. colours , shapes , textures
. what can you feel ? , valiant
. distraught
. the weight of the wet baby
What can you touch?
When you use a Shift, you need to follow these bullet points.
. imagine a time- flashback.
. write a new paragraph from the time.
. E.g. ten minutes earlier, the previous night, a year ago, a year later.
When you use a Zoom in you need to follow these bullet points
. you can focus on any part of the image to ‘zoom into.’
. the tiny shoeless foot of the baby perhaps?
When you use a Zoom out you need to follow these bullet points
. in the distance …
. where have they travelled from?
. where thy will go now off the pebble beach.
. the others on the beach.